So you written a story and would like a fresh pair of eyes… in exchange for you doing the same.
While there is no Do THIS and DO THAT instructions, I have found people give the same advice and this is what I tend to do when critiquing a picture book manuscript:
- Read the story through twice
- Put it down for a day
- Read story out loud, while making notes
- Read again to myself, while making additional notes (if any)
What notes do I make you may ask?
- flow pattern
- pov shift
- suggestions on how to improve
- comments on what I think (love this line, etc)
- add or delete word(s) or phrase
- anything I think will help improve the manuscript
How do I format my critique? I like to think of it as a sandwich. You get two pieces of bread and then the good stuff in the middle.
The first piece of bread is me giving some basic instructions and an overall feel of the story. *I make a point to stay positive. FIND something you like*
The middle is where I include my notes, suggestions, and comments. *This is the meaty part. Yes, there will be constructive criticism here, but you are wanting it to get better. VERY rarely will you run across something that is absolutely ready with nothing to comment on*
The last piece of bread is where I go into my overall comments of the story. I may also comment about marketing, submitting possibilities, and other things that may pop into my head.
Critiquing is like writing though. You get better with practice. BUT even someone who is new can see things that others may overlook. The best thing is to take the plunge, jump in feet first, and enjoy the water.
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